Comic 2 - Use the surroudings

2nd Apr 2012, 12:00 AM
Use the surroudings
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)

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helpusobi1 2nd Apr 2012, 12:00 AM edit delete
helpusobi1
I hate the composition of this comic. It gets better, trust me. I started out using Paint.NET, but change in about 20 more comics or so. So hang in there.
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Azureink 2nd Apr 2012, 6:15 AM edit delete reply
Azureink
One thing that would help is to have different color dialogue bubbles or fonts or something. I had to re-read the last page to remember which one was Mark so I could deduce which person was talking in the last chat bubble.
DragonTrainer 2nd Apr 2012, 1:00 PM edit delete reply
DragonTrainer
Wasn't expecting the notebook background. Nice touch. Gives it a real tabletop feel to it, surprisingly enough. ^_^

Can't wait to see how you handle the other characters. I'm guessing Josh will be playing as Sallah later on?
helpusobi1 2nd Apr 2012, 8:10 PM edit delete reply
helpusobi1
Josh actually plays Marion. Sallah is an NPC.
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